Thursday, 13 April 2017

Purpose: to inform
WALT describe with clear and interesting details
Success Criteria
  • Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
  • Interesting beginning and ending
  • Using the senses (see, touch, hear, smell)
  • Includes strong descriptive words (adjectives)
  • Uses the present tense

Examples: Bamboo Forest / Scene Description by Dylan / Scene Description by Sophia

                            Maraetotara falls

AS i Rub my eyes i realised that it is not a dream it was a sunny and very hot day. simmering water washing side to side.
the water was coming from above us People were playing in the water it was as deep as a horse the water was mouldy and green like the tall Trees on the the side everyone was jumping off the waterfall they were smiling to everyone
around them and the rocks were as soft as a
cat they were at maraetotara falls