Thursday, 13 April 2017

Purpose: to inform
WALT describe with clear and interesting details
Success Criteria
  • Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
  • Interesting beginning and ending
  • Using the senses (see, touch, hear, smell)
  • Includes strong descriptive words (adjectives)
  • Uses the present tense

Examples: Bamboo Forest / Scene Description by Dylan / Scene Description by Sophia

                            Maraetotara falls

AS i Rub my eyes i realised that it is not a dream it was a sunny and very hot day. simmering water washing side to side.
the water was coming from above us People were playing in the water it was as deep as a horse the water was mouldy and green like the tall Trees on the the side everyone was jumping off the waterfall they were smiling to everyone
around them and the rocks were as soft as a
cat they were at maraetotara falls


  1. that was sooooo cool you put so much detail into it keep it uppp

  2. that is really cool keep up the good work

  3. Wow piper I can clearly see your hard work and I can also see that you like being around maraetorta fall's because of your amazing writing. Keep the hard work up.

  4. wow dff this is amazing i can see you hard work i can see that you love water falls stay happy bff seeyou soon